It smelt like berries.
It was cold in my mouth.
It was yummy!
By Lucas
Tuesday, May 13, 2014
Lucas's yummy smoothie!
My smoothie is pink and it has bubbles and seeds in it.
It smelt like berries.
It was cold in my mouth.
It was yummy!
By Lucas
It smelt like berries.
It was cold in my mouth.
It was yummy!
By Lucas
Eli's great smoothie!
My smoothie looks white and has bubbles.
It smells icy and feels cold and smooth.
It tastes icy and creamy.
By Eli
It smells icy and feels cold and smooth.
It tastes icy and creamy.
By Eli
Alaska's favourite drink
My smoothie looks like candy-floss.
I can smell the bubbles.
It feels cold.
It tastes like berries.
You should try it.
By Alaska
I can smell the bubbles.
It feels cold.
It tastes like berries.
You should try it.
By Alaska
Kelly's super smoothie
My smoothie is pink and looks like wool.
It smells like bananas.
It feels cold in my mouth.
It tastes creamy and icy.
By Kelly
It smells like bananas.
It feels cold in my mouth.
It tastes creamy and icy.
By Kelly
Jemma's smoothie
My smoothie has bubbles that look like pink seeds.
It smells juicy with berries.
It felt icy and wet when it was in my mouth.
It taste fruity.
It smells juicy with berries.
It felt icy and wet when it was in my mouth.
It taste fruity.
Nick's Smoothie
My smoothie has bubbles.
It is cold on my tongue.
It is smooth like milk.
It taste cold when I swallowed it.
By Nick
It is cold on my tongue.
It is smooth like milk.
It taste cold when I swallowed it.
By Nick
Sunday, May 11, 2014
Welcome
Welcome to the Junior Writers' Club Blog!
We will be publishing our writing here for you to read and respond to with feedback.
By Mrs Wispinski
We will be publishing our writing here for you to read and respond to with feedback.
By Mrs Wispinski
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